The full Moon dawns on the break of night
Solar reflection, Brian’s selection
The theme for All Hallows Eve.
Her full moon dawns on my line of sight
Solar reflection’s reflection’s detection
From my pond she doth retrieve.
I see it in the water of my eyes
In the mirror on the wall
Out the window to it all
In her rippled rings of water
In the pond
On her moon
On the Moon
In rings of water drops
In the sky
Sol still
Reverberating
His gong
Long gone
Not yet.
This is my submission to this installment of 10th Daughter of Memory, though the post just before this is the result of getting so reflective about the Moon’s dawning I followed curiosity way off the theme. Boy oh boy, without reflection detection we’d need television.
7 comments:
This begs of surrealism to me. Nice.
nice...i like the flow of imagery...i agree with jeffscape, rather surreal....the tears in the eye...nice.
I like the rhythm there, it was fun to read. Very cool.
That is beautiful. I love it.
Very nice and I like the flow of this one, sort of like your mind skipping down a trail
very clever and gentle :)
The repetition of sounds and words is very soothing, and the imagery adds beautifully to that.
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