tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post856716482446441113..comments2023-10-31T04:56:00.798-05:00Comments on It Must Be the Vapors…: BEGUILED BY NIGHTYodoodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09244765916380830711noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-78598229199852748922010-04-10T18:50:38.379-05:002010-04-10T18:50:38.379-05:00Really great work. I'm with PattiKen, it has ...Really great work. I'm with PattiKen, it has the feel of a psalm of sorts.<br /><br />And I didn't have to look up "filigree," I have some tattooed. :)Kryshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263488489506383631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-89591137471341185162010-04-07T13:44:21.570-05:002010-04-07T13:44:21.570-05:00mmm, i wish my thoughts moved as yours when i summ...mmm, i wish my thoughts moved as yours when i summer in my garden. but i guess i can't stop picking weeds long enough to wax poetic. an entire tome of these ponderful nature morsels would satisfy; and lemonade.Tomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10948978798395906663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-82543394722888078782010-04-07T12:05:13.372-05:002010-04-07T12:05:13.372-05:00I'm with She Writes. The second paragraph is e...I'm with She Writes. The second paragraph is excellent (though I did have to look up "filigree"), but the final one is even better.<br /><br />You, sir, are a natural romantic. Or a romanced naturalist. I suspect both.JeffScapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00190641629175438603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-25077719619302045572010-04-07T07:58:31.789-05:002010-04-07T07:58:31.789-05:00Maybe it's the flute music, which sounds so Na...Maybe it's the flute music, which sounds so Native American, but your words feel like a Navajo hymn. Their "religious" beliefs, based on respect for Nature, has always spoken to me. Your piece here does the same, recounting night into day into night. It's the natural flow of things.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-49069545257177277842010-04-05T13:19:00.096-05:002010-04-05T13:19:00.096-05:00Fascinating- you caught nature by the tail, here, ...Fascinating- you caught nature by the tail, here, and turned her loose with facepaint.<br /><br />You captured the essence of sunrise with the spectrum of wildland creatures and their voices.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-56820171957055011822010-04-04T14:37:05.984-05:002010-04-04T14:37:05.984-05:00Brian, your mistake was due to my misspelling. It ...Brian, your mistake was due to my misspelling. It should have been "…bufo orgy time", not that bluffalo orgy wouldn't be funny.Yodoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09244765916380830711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-61390617555260827342010-04-04T13:57:31.220-05:002010-04-04T13:57:31.220-05:00Amy, I hadn't even my first edit and here you ...Amy, I hadn't even my first edit and here you are. By your post 57 minutes early, it's obvious we have similar writing non-schedules. Thanks for the generous recognition of my attempt to emulate the flow of nature in my writing.<br /><br />Brian, that's Buffo as in buffo=toad. Buffalo, Hah, didn't suspect I'd be taken so humorously!Yodoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09244765916380830711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-71183552012501717412010-04-04T13:44:06.413-05:002010-04-04T13:44:06.413-05:00some fabulous descriptors ...buffalo orgy and pink...some fabulous descriptors ...buffalo orgy and pink floyd dewdrops...beguiled i am...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-45457493140548336202010-04-04T11:28:21.753-05:002010-04-04T11:28:21.753-05:00That second paragraph... Very nice. Enjoyed the wh...That second paragraph... Very nice. Enjoyed the whole piece, but the second paragraph had me especially looking forward to what you would write next. Liked it!Unspokenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.com