tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post5084205928936327322..comments2023-10-31T04:56:00.798-05:00Comments on It Must Be the Vapors…: DRAWN BRIDGESYodoodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09244765916380830711noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-82382438598842382062009-10-10T18:12:54.335-05:002009-10-10T18:12:54.335-05:00How interesting. From your subject matter to your...How interesting. From your subject matter to your sentence structure to your meter. I am awed at the way you weave words into thoughts rather than sentences.Not For Jellyfishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08168569867944572358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-45341714600903566392009-10-07T15:42:00.883-05:002009-10-07T15:42:00.883-05:00Yes, that'll do :)Yes, that'll do :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-61245765577871782872009-10-07T08:51:16.074-05:002009-10-07T08:51:16.074-05:00intriguing post...your play with words and sentenc...intriguing post...your play with words and sentences drawns me in...i will admit i had to read this one twice and i am sure there are much deeper thoughts as each ingredient is seperated to be appreciated along with the whole. i do like the word mortmain, though i doubt i have ever used it, i have seen it in action over and over. enjoyed the journey, be back soon.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-28707116540770956892009-10-06T20:13:13.674-05:002009-10-06T20:13:13.674-05:00Yoork, Welcome
Cinnamon, so I can put you down in...Yoork, Welcome<br /><br />Cinnamon, so I can put you down in the "not too facile" column then?Yodoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09244765916380830711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-2074589210198184032009-10-06T15:12:28.225-05:002009-10-06T15:12:28.225-05:00Oh dear friend, I am going to have to take a cours...Oh dear friend, I am going to have to take a course in logical thinking to 'get' you! My brain is aching with the gymnastics required to understand your concepts such as 'neomortmain traditions'. I'm going to have to take myself off to the moat in my city, sit awhile overlooking the drawbridge and meditate on this. My brain is a Big Mac!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-35216849087784421932009-10-03T20:27:45.631-05:002009-10-03T20:27:45.631-05:00Bridge o'er troubled waters?
"mortmain, ...Bridge o'er troubled waters?<br /><br />"mortmain, n. dead hand, which immediately evoked the trap of tradition as a limit on contemporary thought and thereby behavior. "<br /><br />- Interesting. I will enter this word into my vernacular.Yoorkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07898051554190306177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-67419864828533397622009-10-03T11:36:22.284-05:002009-10-03T11:36:22.284-05:00To be honest, I do usually dislike too many length...To be honest, I do usually dislike too many lengthy sentences in a row, but it's highly appropriate for this piece and its theme.<br /><br />Loved it.JeffScapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00190641629175438603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-44551852432264278302009-10-03T10:09:59.706-05:002009-10-03T10:09:59.706-05:00JeffScape, it usually draws complaints from seeke...JeffScape, it usually draws complaints from seekers of page turners, thanks for going deeper.<br /><br />Lilwave, glad you are taking your time through the meanders, as Pisces would call them. Also happy you decided to submit your piece, very haunting because I still don't understand that more-perfect-creator-than-the-body-I, who supposedly feels trapped for life in a body, or is that even the same one? Schizophrenia? Visiting Deity? Alien possession? You folks from around the Pascagoula River are all pretty weird, but not too weird for Austin though they or you never make it this far. ;D <br /><br />Mike, exactly, today only serves as a reminder of what we think we know already and what that prepares us for next, like the shopping list repeating what we eat so we know what we're gonna shit, despite the healthier food to be eaten spontaneously during one's day outside the store.<br /><br />Pisces, my body/mind/ego loves thinking it has learned to express such thoughts to necessarily (bridge/wedge) other minds and tingles knowing universal conscious can perceive and understand itself; one eye on the sole soul potato winking at another.Yodoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09244765916380830711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-74566229429854790352009-10-03T03:25:45.199-05:002009-10-03T03:25:45.199-05:00"...the bulk of our retained memories and our..."...the bulk of our retained memories and our impatience to be rewarded for bearing them"<br />the depth of self-examination required to make this observation takes my breath away - bravo!<br /><br />As with all of your most intense writing, I truely appreciate being allowed to follow your meandering thoughts - earth tremors for the soul.Garthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-2991786779766047322009-10-02T21:30:46.345-05:002009-10-02T21:30:46.345-05:00Good essay. We create past and future from the pre...Good essay. We create past and future from the present. All is now.Mike Goldmanhttp://www.facebook.com/mahakalnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-43616732363333616542009-10-02T21:21:10.884-05:002009-10-02T21:21:10.884-05:00I've read this several times. I'm still tr...I've read this several times. I'm still trying to find its full meaning. It's one I must walk away and think about it, then come back to take more in. It is very deep and written with such passion.Lilwavehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06180488374061262082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29705116.post-29880568881151444322009-10-02T20:36:40.142-05:002009-10-02T20:36:40.142-05:00I dunno why, but I just love your sentence structu...I dunno why, but I just love your sentence structure.JeffScapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00190641629175438603noreply@blogger.com